The last concept i shared (below) just lost something for me in the process.
I stopped mid way because I STILL was stuck on the motivation of the character and it supporting story .
So i started over and tried to keep some of the original influence there yet come up with something more personal.
I came up with this...still very loose but it's a start
Sniper hunter, former Marine.
K.I.A body donated at the request of the now deceased to Darpa group for testing
cortex system awake date
1st recorded combat action 9/26/01